In my pitch, I showed the research and work I had done so far. I think all of the research, from war plays to surveys, was relevant and helped me in my progress. The thing I would criticise is that I haven't worked on the book itself. It has created a lot of pressure and if I had done something I had written before, it would be a lot easier. To solve this, I'm going to work on the book itself at home, about 5-10 pages a day, and work on things that I need the facilities at college for in college.
I liked my presentation, and what I included, but I did go in with notes in my hand. This meant when I strayed from them, I got a little lost and stuttered. For instance, if I was talking about my idea, and then went to my notes, it would read what I've said just differently, so I'd be thrown. Next time, I want to go in with just a few words summarising what to talk about, or even no notes at all. This means I can keep eye contact with the clients, and keep it natural, rather than talk at them.
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